It looks good to me although i don't know know much about most of those ingredients. I can't beleive how quick my obsession with a better beer has moved since i started using the forum. Going to order some crystal malt, munich malt and more hops tomorrow after going through john palmers 'how to brew' again. Will know tomorrow when trying to order but does Pale LME mean a style of liquid malt? If i can't find 'Perle" hops, what would be similar? Gonna make a pilsener and a malty-bitter oktoberfest soon.
Cheers